看一下这篇英语文章有什么错误?ChinaChina is a country with 5000 years of cultural tradition.China is a vast land,is a large country.Have 9.6 million kilometers of land.It has a population of 1.3 billion.The Yangtze River and Yellow River

看一下这篇英语文章有什么错误?ChinaChina is a country with 5000 years of cultural tradition.China is a vast land,is a large country.Have 9.6 million kilometers of land.It has a population of 1.3 billion.The Yangtze River and Yellow River
看一下这篇英语文章有什么错误?
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China is a country with 5000 years of cultural tradition.
China is a vast land,is a large country.Have 9.6 million kilometers of land.It has a population of 1.3 billion.
The Yangtze River and Yellow River runs through the whole of China.In Tibet and Nepal border,the highest peak in the world is the Mount Everest.The Great Wall is one of the Seven Wonders of the World architectural marvels.
China is one of the four ancient civilizations.In ancient China has four great inventions,they were a compass,papermaking,printing and gunpowder.And condensed the essence of Chinese ancient literature of the four great classics.
I like Chinese!
这是我根据我的意思，用有道翻译，翻译的。

看一下这篇英语文章有什么错误?ChinaChina is a country with 5000 years of cultural tradition.China is a vast land,is a large country.Have 9.6 million kilometers of land.It has a population of 1.3 billion.The Yangtze River and Yellow River
1.China is a vast land,is a large country.Have 9.6 million kilometers of land
改为China is a large country with vast land occupying 9.6 million kilometers.
2.The Yangtze River and Yellow River runs through the whole of China
runs改为run,the whole of China改为the whole China
3.In ancient China has four great inventions,they were a compass,papermaking,printing and gunpowder.
改为There are four great inventions in ancient China.They were compass,papermaking,printing and gunpowder.
4.And condensed the essence of Chinese ancient literature of the four great classics.
改为China's four famous ancient concentrated essence of literature.（中国的四大名著浓缩了古代文学的本质.）

China is a vast landand is a large country and has 9.6 million kilometers of land
The Yangtze River and Yellow River run through the whole of China

错误很多，你用谷歌翻译重弄一下吧。

1.The Yangtze River and Yellow River runs through the whole of China => The Yangtze River and Yellow River runs through the whole China
2.In ancient China has four great inventions => ancient China has four great inventions
3. And condensed the essence => which condensed the essence

China is a country with culture of 5000 years.
As a large country, China covers 9.6 million square kilometers.It has a population of 1.3 billion.
The Yangtze River and Yellow River run through...

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China is a country with culture of 5000 years.
As a large country, China covers 9.6 million square kilometers.It has a population of 1.3 billion.
The Yangtze River and Yellow River run through the whole China. At the border of Tibet and Nepal lies the highest peak in the world--the Mount Everest. The Great Wall is one of the Seven Wonders of the world's architectural marvels.
China is one of the four countries which have ancient civilization. In ancient China, peolpe has invened four great inventions, which are compass, papermaking, printing and gunpowder. (And condensed the essence of Chinese ancient literature of the four great classics.)这句话老实说我也觉得有问题，但我不知道你想要表达什么意思，所以没改，其他的从文法和语法上我都做了相应的修改
I like Chinese!

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这整个是一篇Chinglish

1、China is a vast land, is a large country. Have 9.6 million kilometers of land. 改为China is a vast land and a large country,which has 9.6 million kilometers of land.
2、runs改为run
3、they were a...

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1、China is a vast land, is a large country. Have 9.6 million kilometers of land. 改为China is a vast land and a large country,which has 9.6 million kilometers of land.
2、runs改为run
3、they were a compass……改为which are ……（变为定语从句，另外不用过去时，因为这是公认事实）
4、And condensed the essence……缺主语，And 后加they

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