英语高手帮忙看看这篇文章有什么语法错误或用词不当等等,请指出,didn't call me tonight.i am so glad.i have been afraid that h will call me,and i don't know how to face h.last night i made a right decision.from this case,i kno

英语高手帮忙看看这篇文章有什么语法错误或用词不当等等,请指出,didn't call me tonight.i am so glad.i have been afraid that h will call me,and i don't know how to face h.last night i made a right decision.from this case,i kno
英语高手帮忙看看这篇文章有什么语法错误或用词不当等等,请指出,didn't call me tonight.i am so glad.i have been afraid that h will call me,and i don't know how to face h.last night i made a right decision.from this case,i know that every time we face a problem ,we should never bury your head in sand.we should face it bravely,because,in any case,you have to solve the problem,if you can hide yourself today,maybe you have to face it tomorrow,and you will feel depressed the whole day.so why don't solve it right now.

英语高手帮忙看看这篇文章有什么语法错误或用词不当等等,请指出,didn't call me tonight.i am so glad.i have been afraid that h will call me,and i don't know how to face h.last night i made a right decision.from this case,i kno
h（He） didn't call me tonight.i am（was,因为你这里是在知道他没打电话之前的感受,所以用was） so glad.i have been（不用have been,就用was行了） afraid that h（he） will call me,and i don't（同理,didn't） know how to face h（him）.last night i made a right decision.from this case,i know（knew） that every time we face a problem ,we should never bury your head in sand.we should face it bravely,because,in any case,you have to solve the problem,if you can（can可以不用,这样更通畅） hide yourself today,maybe you have to face it tomorrow,and you will feel depressed the whole day.so why don't（加上一个you） solve it right now.
主要就是时态有点小问题
第二个建议he和him不要缩写成h,要不然会弄错
主题明确,很好

have been - had been
will - would
don't - didn't
last night i made a right decision.from this case ????
your head - our heads
sand - the sand
hide yourself - avoid it
why don't - why not

I am so glad he didn't call me tonight. I was afraid that he might call me, and I wouldn't know how to face him. Yesterday I did the right ting. From this case I know that we should never bury our hea...

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I am so glad he didn't call me tonight. I was afraid that he might call me, and I wouldn't know how to face him. Yesterday I did the right ting. From this case I know that we should never bury our heads in sand whenever we face a problem. We should face it bravely instead. Because even if we hide ourselves today, we still will have to solve the problem eventually. Instead of facing the problem tomorrow and feeling depressed the whole day today, why not solve it right now!
写的不错，只是句子太分散，可以合起来使意思更连贯。

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h?? he? 我就假设是he，不喜欢你可以再改成h
i'm so glad that he didn't call me tonight. I was so afraid that he would call me, because i didn't know how to face him. Last night, i made the right decision. From now...

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h?? he? 我就假设是he，不喜欢你可以再改成h
i'm so glad that he didn't call me tonight. I was so afraid that he would call me, because i didn't know how to face him. Last night, i made the right decision. From now on, i know that whenever we face a problem we should never bury our head into the sand. Instead, we should always face it bravely because no matter what, you have to solve it anyway. You may be able to hide from it today but you may face it again tomorrow and you will always feel depressed. So why don't you solve it right now?

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