大家帮我看看我的英文简历,看看哪里写的有问题!Personal Name:Gender:Male Date of Birth:Nov,1981 Degree:M.E.Major:Applied Computer Science Research Area:Data mining Address:17-415,Nankai University,Tianjin,300071,China Mobile:E-mail:

大家帮我看看我的英文简历,看看哪里写的有问题!Personal Name:Gender:Male Date of Birth:Nov,1981 Degree:M.E.Major:Applied Computer Science Research Area:Data mining Address:17-415,Nankai University,Tianjin,300071,China Mobile:E-mail:
大家帮我看看我的英文简历,看看哪里写的有问题!
Personal
Name:Gender:Male
Date of Birth:Nov,1981 Degree:M.E.
Major:Applied Computer Science Research Area:Data mining
Address:17-415,Nankai University,Tianjin,300071,China
Mobile:
E-mail:
Objective
To obtain a challenging position as a software engineer with an emphasis in software design and development.
Self Assessment
Self-motivated; Team work spirit; High liability and attribution; Hard working,cooperative; Respond well under great pressure; Modest and friendly.
Education
2004/09--Present Nankai University Computer Application Master
2000/09--2004/07 Xiamen University Environmental Science Bachelor
Work Experience
2005/09--2006/09 Yield Dynamics,Inc.
Metadata Group Senior Software Engineer Full-time
Enhanced and maintained the Genesis software.
Achievements:Developing while maintaining.Quickly fixed bugs and successfully completed the complex merging enhancements; Urge forwarded the File Base project.
2005/07--2005/09 Xinchi Technology Co.,Ltd
Card Game Group Software Engineer Intern
Responsible of card games development
Achievements:Successfully developed a card game named Chudadi.
Project Experience
2006/05--2006/09 File Base Server
Project Description:
Filebase is a file database which stores,retrieves and manages files.Ins and outs of files through Filebase server are dependent of file attributes.To speed up the retrieve,several indexes are used.
Responsibility:
Participated in the design of framework; Completed a cross-platform thread library and a dynamic thread pool.In addition,completed a B+ tree index and found out the best way to store it.
2005/05--2005/09?Chudadi Online Card Game
Project Description:
To design one card game based on network for 263 Corporation.
Responsibility:
Design of the Architecture,realization of functions and integration test.
2005/03--2005/05 MIS of Zepu,Inc.
Project Description:
To enable Zepu to meet its goals and business challenges.
Responsibility:
Design of the database tables to meet BCNF,realization of Stored Procedures,development of the client.
2004/10--2004/11 Data Mining of the Credit Card Dataset
Project Description:
To analyze the dataset in order to find out valuable potential information by using data mining algorithms.
Responsibility:
Realized Apriori algorithm,and successfully searched out many potential relation information.
下面还有,呵呵!
Professional Skills
Programming Languages:
Rich developing experience in Standard C/C++; Good understanding of object-oriented and generic programming theory; Familiar with design patterns; Expert in multi-threads programming; Skillful of cross-platform developing; Rich Experience in C/C++ programming under Linux/UNIX.Fluent user of make,gcc/g++,gdb; Experience in writing Makefile; Some experience in C# and JAVA.
Operating System:
Familiar with MINIX kernel; Fluent user of LINUX/UNIX.
Database:
Rich knowledge and experience in database theory and standard SQL; Skillful in SQL Server and familiar with Oracle.
Network Technology:
Systematically studied network technology; Familiar with TCP/IP,experience in Network Programming.
Others:
Good knowledge of mathematics; Some knowledge of parallel programming.
Language Abilities
English:2001/06 CET-4,2002/06 CET-6
Skillful in reading and writing professional material?having the ability of listening,speaking.

大家帮我看看我的英文简历,看看哪里写的有问题!Personal Name:Gender:Male Date of Birth:Nov,1981 Degree:M.E.Major:Applied Computer Science Research Area:Data mining Address:17-415,Nankai University,Tianjin,300071,China Mobile:E-mail:
1.
2005/07--2005/09 Xinchi Technology Co.,Ltd
Card Game Group Software Engineer Intern
Responsible of card games development (为responsible for C game development：负责纸牌游戏开发)
2.
Responsibility:
Design of the Architecture,realization of functions and integration test.（不明白你要表达的意思.是不是讲主体设计,实现其功能并完成其综合测试.如是,Main design work（主要设计工作）比较好）
3.
Operating System:
Familiar with MINIX kernel; Fluent user of LINUX/UNIX.（Fluent user Fluent表流离、流畅地说、讲,看你也可算是牛人一个,用Proficiency in LINUX/UNIX 吧,精通LINUX/UNIX)
4.
Rich knowledge and experience in database theory and standard SQL; Skillful in SQL Server and familiar with Oracle.（有技巧的有经验的不用SKILLFUL,用experienced in SQL Server and familiar with Oracle.能表现你有丰富的实践经验,而非理论而已.)
5.
Skillful in reading and writing professional material,having the ability of listening,speaking.英语不好就讲practical skills in english writing and reading,fine in professional material,good in listening and speaking.
英语好就讲一句EXCELLENT in english,然后用你的口水让他明白什么叫EXCELLENT.
简历写的不错,要是本人写的就很不错了,一般英语不是问题了.
最后讲一句,牛!真牛!

如果要是去外企,一些对于外国人来讲的隐私信息可以不要的,当然,现在国人也跟风了.

Personal Information
Name: Gender: Male
Date of Birth: Nov, 1981 Degree: M.E.
Major: Applied Computer Science Research Area: Data mining
Address: 17-415, Nankai University, Tianjin,...

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Personal Information
Name: Gender: Male
Date of Birth: Nov, 1981 Degree: M.E.
Major: Applied Computer Science Research Area: Data mining
Address: 17-415, Nankai University, Tianjin, P.R.China
Mobile:
E-mail:
Objective :
To obtain a challenging position as a software engineer with an emphasis in software design and development.
Self Assessment:
Self-motivated; Team work spirit; High responsibility and attribution; Hard working, cooperative; Respond well under high pressure; Modest and easy-going.
Education Background:
2004/09--Present : Nankai University Computer Application Master
2000/09--2004/07 : Xiamen University Environmental Science Bachelor
Working Experience:
2005/09--2006/09 Yield Dynamics, Inc.
Metadata Group Senior Software Engineer Full-time
Enhanced and maintained the Genesis software.
Achievements: Developing while maintaining. Quickly fixed bugs and successfully completed the complex merging enhancements; Urge forwarded the File Base project.
2005/07--2005/09 Xinchi Technology Co., Ltd
As a Card Game Group Software Engineer Intern.
Responsible for card games development
Achievements: Successfully developed a card game named Chudadi.
Projects Experience
2006/05--2006/09 File Base Server
Project Description:
Filebase is a file database which stores, retrieves and manages files. Ins and outs of files through Filebase server are dependent of file attributes. To speed up the retrieve, several indexes are used.
Responsibility:
Participated in the design of framework; Completed a cross-platform thread library and a dynamic thread pool. In addition, completed a B+ tree index and found out the best way to store it.
2005/05--2005/09?Chudadi Online Card Game
Project Description:
To design one card game based on network for 263 Corporation.
Responsibility:
Design of the Architecture, realization of functions and integration test.
2005/03--2005/05 MIS of Zepu, Inc.
Project Description:
To enable Zepu to meet its goals and business challenges.
Responsibility:
Design of the database tables to meet BCNF, realization of Stored Procedures, development of the client.
2004/10--2004/11 Data Mining of the Credit Card Dataset
Project Description:
To analyze the dataset in order to find out valuable potential information by using data mining algorithms.
Responsibility:
Realized Apriori algorithm, and successfully searched out many potential relation information.
下面还有，呵呵！！！！
问题补充：Professional Skills
Programming Languages:
Rich developing experience in Standard C/C++; Profound understanding on object-oriented and generic programming theory; Familiar with design patterns; Expert in multi-threads programming; Skillful of cross-platform developing; Rich Experience in C/C++ programming under Linux/UNIX. Fluent user of make, gcc/g++, gdb; Experience in writing Makefile; Some experience in C# and JAVA.
Operating System:
Familiar with MINIX kernel; Fluent user of LINUX/UNIX.
Database:
Rich knowledge and experience in database theory and standard SQL; Skillful in SQL Server and familiar with Oracle.
Network Technology:
Systematically studied network technology; Familiar with TCP/IP, experience in Network Programming.
Others:
Knowledgeable at mathematics; and sldo knowledgeable at parallel programming.
Language Abilities
English: 2001/06 CET-4, 2002/06 CET-6
Skillful in reading and writing professional material.good ability of listening and spoken

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Objective
To obtain a challenging position as a software engineer with an emphasis in software design and development.
~~emphasis on
Self Assessment
Self-motivated; Team w...

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Objective
To obtain a challenging position as a software engineer with an emphasis in software design and development.
~~emphasis on
Self Assessment
Self-motivated; Team work spirit; High liability and attribution; Hard working, cooperative; Respond well under great pressure; Modest and friendly.
Education
2004/09--Present Nankai University Computer Application Master
~~~~~~~~~~专业和你上面的不一致啊，
2000/09--2004/07 Xiamen University Environmental Science Bachelor
～～～～学校，专业，学位之间是不是应该用分号隔开啊
Work Experience
2005/09--2006/09 Yield Dynamics, Inc.
Metadata Group Senior Software Engineer Full-time
Enhanced and maintained the Genesis software.
Achievements: Developing while maintaining. Quickly fixed bugs and successfully completed the complex merging enhancements; Urge forwarded the File Base project.
2005/07--2005/09 Xinchi Technology Co., Ltd
Card Game Group Software Engineer Intern
Responsible of card games development
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Achievements: Successfully developed a card game named Chudadi.
～～～～～～～～developing a card game named chudadi successfully

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