求高手改错,十个错误,I am a high school student .A few days before ,one of my very...求高手改错,十个错误,I am a high school student .A few days before ,one of my very good friend told me that he was going to stop school .He said that

求高手改错,十个错误,I am a high school student .A few days before ,one of my very...求高手改错,十个错误,I am a high school student .A few days before ,one of my very good friend told me that he was going to stop school .He said that
求高手改错,十个错误,I am a high school student .A few days before ,one of my very...
求高手改错,十个错误,I am a high school student .A few days before ,one of my very good friend told me that he was going to stop school .He said that he wanted to start his own's business .I tried my best to get him to change his mind ,and failed .I realize it is difficult of me to change his mind .He is not doing so good in his studies .The process is more important than the result is .Now there are only 90 days being left before the test .I am not sure his decision is right or wrong .I needed your advice .

求高手改错,十个错误,I am a high school student .A few days before ,one of my very...求高手改错,十个错误,I am a high school student .A few days before ,one of my very good friend told me that he was going to stop school .He said that
1 before 改为 ago
2 friend 改为 friends
3 own's 改为 own
4 to change 改为 change
5 and 改为 but
6 of me 改为 for me
7 good 改为 well
8 being left 改为 left
9 not sure 改为 not sure whether
10 needed 改为 need

before-ago, friend-friends,own's-own, and(failed)-but, (difficult) of-for, (so)good-well, result后面的is去掉，being(left)去掉，sure后面加whether， needed-need
（get sb to do sth 是对的， to change是对的）

I am a high school student .A few days before (ago) ,one of my very good friend (friends) told me that he was going to stop (leave) school .He said that he wanted (wants) to start his own's business ....

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I am a high school student .A few days before (ago) ,one of my very good friend (friends) told me that he was going to stop (leave) school .He said that he wanted (wants) to start his own's business .I tried my best to get him to change his mind ,and (but) failed .I realize it is difficult of (for)me to change his mind .He is not doing so (very) good in his studies .The process is more important than the result is (is 去掉).Now there are only 90 days being (being 去掉)left before the test .I am not sure his decision is right or wrong .I needed (need)your advice .

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Before-ago, stop-drop, own's-own, and failed-but failed, I realize it is difficult of me to change his mind---I realized it was difficult for me to change his mind, the result is--the result, being left--left, I needed- I need.

I am a high school student .A few days before(ago) ,one of my very good friend (friends)told me that he was going to stop school(schooling) .He said that he wanted to start his own's(own) business .I ...

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I am a high school student .A few days before(ago) ,one of my very good friend (friends)told me that he was going to stop school(schooling) .He said that he wanted to start his own's(own) business .I tried my best to get him to change his mind ,and (but)failed .I realize it is difficult of(for) me to change his mind .He is not doing so good(well) in his studies .The process is more important than the result is .Now there are only 90 days being(去掉being) left before the test .I am not sure(加上whether) his decision is right or wrong .I needed（need） your advice .保证完全正确。

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要自己去思考吧

这是我该过之后的 还有综合之前有几个人 他们改得有点问题 我都提出来了
I am a high school student .A few days ago ,one of my very good friends （one of 要加复数形式）told me that he was going to stop school .He said that he wanted to star...

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这是我该过之后的 还有综合之前有几个人 他们改得有点问题 我都提出来了
I am a high school student .A few days ago ,one of my very good friends （one of 要加复数形式）told me that he was going to stop school .He said that he wanted to start his own（own已经有自己的 不用添加所有格 ） business .I tried my best to get him to （get sb to do sth 是没有错的 ）change his mind ,but（这里表示转折） failed .I realize it is difficult for（be difficult for sb to do sth 对于某人来说做某事太难） me to change his mind .He is not doing so well in（do well in 固定搭配） his studies .The process is more important than the result（多了is） .Now there are only 90 days left （剩下的 做定语的时候直接加到被修饰词的后面 不用其他系动词）before the test .I am not sure his decision is right or not （这里用这种形式就ok了 翻译起来比whether省事）. I need（时态不对） your advice .
望采纳！

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这其实是高考题，有10行，其实是9处错误，有一行是正确的。
看我的标准答案：
before 改为 ago
friend 改为 friends
own's 改为 own
and 改为 but
of 改为 for(句型 it is difficult for sb to do sth)
good 改为 well
being left....

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这其实是高考题，有10行，其实是9处错误，有一行是正确的。
看我的标准答案：
before 改为 ago
friend 改为 friends
own's 改为 own
and 改为 but
of 改为 for(句型 it is difficult for sb to do sth)
good 改为 well
being left.... 去掉being
not sure 后添加whether
needed 改为 need

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