Frank is a mechanic and he is very busy working in the hospital.Every day he has to write reports and attend meetings.Yeasterday was Satursay and Frank was not at work.He wanted to see a movie so he went to the library.After the movie,he had lunch in

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Frank is a mechanic and he is very busy working in the hospital.Every day he has to write reports and attend meetings.Yeasterday was Satursay and Frank was not at work.He wanted to see a movie so he went to the library.After the movie,he had lunch in

Frank is a mechanic and he is very busy working in the hospital.Every day he has to write reports and attend meetings.Yeasterday was Satursay and Frank was not at work.He wanted to see a movie so he went to the library.After the movie,he had lunch in
Frank is a mechanic and he is very busy working in the hospital.Every day he has to write reports and attend meetings.Yeasterday was Satursay and Frank was not at work.He wanted to see a movie so he went to the library.After the movie,he had lunch in the supermarket.Then he met his girlfriend,Janet.She is a waitress,but shi doesn't like working in a school.She wants to be a manager and work in a police station.Janet and Frank went to the bank to buy some ice cream.In the evening they went to a department store to dance.【改错】说的清楚一些.最好是正确的全文.thanks a lot.

Frank is a mechanic and he is very busy working in the hospital.Every day he has to write reports and attend meetings.Yeasterday was Satursay and Frank was not at work.He wanted to see a movie so he went to the library.After the movie,he had lunch in
这篇东西真心好笑..1.他是mechanic,哪会在hospital工作?所以他是doctor吧?
2.他想去see a moive不应该去library,而是去cinema吧
3.had lunch不是在supermarket,而是在restaurant
4.waitress不应该在school,而在restaurant
5.manager不该在police station,应该是hotel吧
6.buy icecream的地方不是bank,而是supermarket
7.dance不该是department store,而是party之类的
所以改错,要不就改上述的地址,要不就改特定场合对应的动作..
改法很多,看要求吧

是的分公司的个放个活动分工阿德哥工具发点