那位英语可以的改下 错啊.短文改错题类The journey was long and tired.We left London at five and spent hours to traveling on the train.We had traveled for three hours after someone appeared selling drinks.It was dark all the time when w

那位英语可以的改下 错啊.短文改错题类The journey was long and tired.We left London at five and spent hours to traveling on the train.We had traveled for three hours after someone appeared selling drinks.It was dark all the time when w
那位英语可以的改下 错啊.短文改错题类
The journey was long and tired.We left London at five and spent hours to traveling on the train.We had traveled for three hours after someone appeared selling drinks.It was dark all the time when we are crossing Wales,so we could see nothing in the window.When we finally arrived,nearly everyone were sleeping.As soon as the train stopped,everybody came to the life,talking their bags or rushing onto the platform.While we were getting off the train it was an announcement that the train have not arrived yet from Ireland and there had been a delay.

那位英语可以的改下 错啊.短文改错题类The journey was long and tired.We left London at five and spent hours to traveling on the train.We had traveled for three hours after someone appeared selling drinks.It was dark all the time when w
The journey was long and tiring.We left London at five and spent hours traveling on the train.We traveled for three hours after someone appeared selling drinks.It was dark all the time when we are crossing Wales,we could see nothing from the window.When we finally arrived,nearly everyone were sleeping.As soon as the train stopped,everybody came to life,talking their bags or rushing onto the platform.While we got off the train it was announced that the train has not arrived yet from Ireland and there had been a delay.

tired-tiring；to-on；after-when；are-were；in-from；sleeping-asleep；or-and；it-there；have-had；from-on；

tired--tiring;
to traveling--travelling;
We had traveled--We traveled;（这里不是过去的过去，不能用过去完成时）
we are crossing--we were crossing;
in the window--through the window;
nearly everyone we...

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tired--tiring;
to traveling--travelling;
We had traveled--We traveled;（这里不是过去的过去，不能用过去完成时）
we are crossing--we were crossing;
in the window--through the window;
nearly everyone were sleeping--almost everyone was sleepy;
As soon as the train stopped--As soon as the train pulled up;
talking their bags--holding their bags;
While we were getting off the train--When we got off the train;
it was an announcement that --there was an announcement that;
have not arrived yet --had not arrived yet;

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