高一英语改错 一共十处语言错误Dear Jack,I'm middle school student.I'm writing to tell you my problem with my mother.She is a doctor ,whom works very hard.She is strict in me,but she is too busy with her work that she found little time to

高一英语改错 一共十处语言错误Dear Jack,I'm middle school student.I'm writing to tell you my problem with my mother.She is a doctor ,whom works very hard.She is strict in me,but she is too busy with her work that she found little time to
高一英语改错 一共十处语言错误
Dear Jack,
I'm middle school student.I'm writing to tell you my problem with my mother.She is a doctor ,whom works very hard.She is strict in me,but she is too busy with her work that she found little time to talk to me.I love her and I do well in my studies,but I still feel a little of afraid of her because she loses her temper easy.I don't know how to communicate with her.Maybe that's why we have seldom sat down and exchanged our feeling and thoughts.I hope we can know more about each other and understand each other well.I do hope we'll be closer.What can I do?
Looking forward to your reply.
Best wishes!
Yours sincerely,
Tom

高一英语改错 一共十处语言错误Dear Jack,I'm middle school student.I'm writing to tell you my problem with my mother.She is a doctor ,whom works very hard.She is strict in me,but she is too busy with her work that she found little time to
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Dear Jack,
I'm (加入a) middle school student.I'm writing to tell you my problem with my mother.She is a doctor,(who) works very hard.She is strict (with) me,but she is (so) busy with her work that she (finds) little time to talk to me.I love her and I do well in my studies,but I still feel a little (去掉of) afraid of her because she loses her temper (easily).I don't know how to communicate with her.Maybe that's why we have seldom sat down and exchanged our (feelings) and thoughts.I hope we can know more about each other and understand each other (better).I do hope we'll be closer.What can I do?
(Look) forward to your reply.
Best wishes!
Yours sincerely,
Tom

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