请帮忙检查语法错误(4)I have a lot of bad habits that need to be change,but the one that makes so many troubles to me is disorganize.First,it cause many inconvenience in my life,sometimes even drive me crazy.For example,there was a time I can

请帮忙检查语法错误(4)I have a lot of bad habits that need to be change,but the one that makes so many troubles to me is disorganize.First,it cause many inconvenience in my life,sometimes even drive me crazy.For example,there was a time I can
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I have a lot of bad habits that need to be change,but the one that makes so many troubles to me is disorganize.
First,it cause many inconvenience in my life,sometimes even drive me crazy.
For example,there was a time I cannot find my key,so i have to stayed at home until I got it under the keyboard,which made me being late to school.
Also,my room was messing around that evey time when I have some friends come to visit my room,i feel pretty embarrassed.
Moreover,this bad habit even affect my work which directly make me loss my job.
When the first time i went my interview,I forgot to bring a chart with me,so I loss the opportunity to have that job.
Another experience I mix an important document with the waste paper and I put them into shredder,so I was fired again.
Finally,I decide to change it,and I believe life will be better after I achieve this goal.

请帮忙检查语法错误(4)I have a lot of bad habits that need to be change,but the one that makes so many troubles to me is disorganize.First,it cause many inconvenience in my life,sometimes even drive me crazy.For example,there was a time I can
1.that need to be change ---- that needs to be changed
2.but the one that makes so many troubles to me is disorganize.
----- especially the disorganezation that causes so many troubles.
3.it cause many inconvenience ----it causes much inconvenience
4.drive me crazy ---- drives me crazy
5.there was a time I cannot find my key ---- once I couldn't find my keys
6.have to stayed ----had to stay
7.late to school ---- late for school
8.was messing around ---- is a mess.
9.that evey time when I have some friends come to visit my room,i feel pretty embarrassed.
---- Every time my friends come to see me,i feel pretty embarrassed.
10.even affect ---- even affects
11.make me loss my job ---- makes me lose my job
12.When the first time i went my interview ---- When i went to my interview for the first time
13.so I loss ----So I lost
14.opportunity to have that job ---- opportunity of that job.
15.experience I mix ----experience was that I mixed
16.waste paper ----wasted paper

1.need to be changed.
2.is disorganization.
3.causes many inconvenience.....even drives me..
4.one time i cant find my key
5.have to stay
6.made me be late for ..
7.my room is...

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1.need to be changed.
2.is disorganization.
3.causes many inconvenience.....even drives me..
4.one time i cant find my key
5.have to stay
6.made me be late for ..
7.my room is messing......... 不通顺.....
8.the bad habit even affects my work,which..makes me lose ..
9.When i took an interview at the first time,i forgot to bring my resume.... lost
不符合英语规范，这里我只是按字面简单的浏览了一遍，还有错误我不一 一指出了。。。。。。

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I have a lot of bad habits that need improvement. but the worst one is the disorganization.
First, it causes inconvenience to my life and sometimes it even drives me crazy. for example, once I co...

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I have a lot of bad habits that need improvement. but the worst one is the disorganization.
First, it causes inconvenience to my life and sometimes it even drives me crazy. for example, once I couldn't find my key and that made me stay at home until I finally got it. because of that, I was late for my school.
also, my room is too messy and every time my friends came to visit me, I would felt really embarrased.
furthermore, this bad habit lead to the result of my losing job for twice. Fisrt one was on the first day of my interview, i forgot to take my chart and failed to grasp the valuable opportunity. And the second one was that i threw the waste papers with an important ducumant unconsiously, which rusulted in my second dismissal.
finally, i decided to change it for i believe life will be better after i have improved it.
急着改了下，不知道对不对。希望能帮到你。。best wishes

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